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My nights are filled with dreams of you,
holding hands as the sweet sun sets.
Heartbeats grow faster, but I slowly break,
these memories of you I will never be able to erase.

I weep from the inside out,
every teardrop counting every moment spent with you.
Nourishing them like a garden of roses,
as I long for you more and more with each passing day.

Never tell me it's just my imagination,
but your smile tells me that you're insecure.
You choke your pillow every night trying to hide the truth,
how much you need me too.

Just tell me that you're hurting,
and I'll find the strength within to save you.
I promise I'll keep you safe from the darkest of storms,
and cherish all your secrets deep within my soul.

My, my, my,
Sweet Obsession.
Hmm.. :heart:
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joycy Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2005   Writer
Excellent :heart:
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2005
thanks. :)
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LenoreLostAngel Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2005
Delicious!
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2005
thanks :)
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TalentWasted Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2005
the first verse reminde me of my horrible breakup with my ex the rest made remeber on how we started out ....god i wish i could for get :(
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2005
:petting: aww i'm sorry to hear the poem affects you in that way.. :hug: don't worry, i believe that you'll forget her!! soon :D
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TalentWasted Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2005
well i have forgotten about it, it happened in like september so yea its just the bad memory of how she decided to end it. anyways yea i might do the zoolander looks but, when i get really bored lol
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2005
lol sure sure! i bet you practise your zoolander poses in front of the mirror for 2 hours before you go to bed. :giggle:
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TalentWasted Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2005
:sarcasticlaugh: ummm no... lol i only do it in the morning after i brush my teeth
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2005
:giggle:
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TalentWasted Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2005
we should talk more this is fun lol got aim? mines penpenthepenguin
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2005
lol no sorry i don't have aim :(
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jonight Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2005   General Artist
"I promise I'll keep you safe from the darkest of storms,
and cherish all your secrets deep within my soul.
"

really? promise?
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2005
:hug: i promise.
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SiempreYo Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2005  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awww, sylvia has a soft spot. i like it except for the last line. i feel like the end with the repetition of the "my" three times is a little much in terms of poetic style. i like it otherwise though, and it's very very sweet. sorry i can't be funny right now, i'm dead tired...:sleep: yet, i still have one more class left!! bleh!!! :faint:
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2005
:blush: yes.. yes she does. not all too comfortable with it though.. i'm just afraid to tell people how much i care about them, i'm afraid i will be misunderstood :shrug:

lol thanks for the constructive criticism.. :slow: i'm not sure what constructive criticism should look like anyways :giggle:

aww i'm like that right now. get your beauty sleep Raquel! :licking: *tucks you in*

:heart: :hug:
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SiempreYo Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2005  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awwww, why would you be misunderstood if you tell them you care for them??? you should always tell someone how you feel even if it's mushy and gushy... lol it's important syl. and if people know you well enough then they won't think it's weird or odd and even if they do, what does it matter? you know you did good and told them how you feel... you shouldn't feel that way love.... xox :frail:

take care of yourself... *mwah*
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2005
:shrug: i don't know. i know everyone wants to be loved and accepted.. but its just... awkward sometimes :O maybe i'm afraid of being misunderstood about my feelings because i misunderstand myself? i don't know how much sense i made.

well, if you tell me to be opeeenn.. i won't be open with you :giggle:

:hug:
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SiempreYo Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2005  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hahahaha, thaaaaaaaaaaaanks syl. you better be open you little loser!! :giggle:

yea, i understand. my boyfriend is like that sometimes... i have to force it out of him because he's so quiet about his feelings and what bothers him...:shrug:
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xFailureByDesignx Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2005
<33 Lovely Poem... :)
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2005
thank you :aww:
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xsilver82 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2005
wow cool poem i like it :blowkiss: :hug:
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2005
:aww: thanks, means alot to me :hug:
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xsilver82 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2005
that ok :hug:
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frankienexus Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2005   Writer
this has so much truth in it.. sigh
wonderful
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2005
thank you :hug:
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PFCPatrickDFA Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005
wonderful peice...very meaningful!
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005
thanks :glomp:
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theblackiris Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005
thats wonderful it sounds some what like the situation ive got going on in my life right now :(
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005
aww.. same here.. thats why i wrote it. :petting:
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theblackiris Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005
yeah sucks doesnt it
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005
uh-huh :cling:
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sarahsoda182 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2005
Oh wow! Fantastic work here, Syl. Who would have thought that an insightful poet lives inside.. Sylvia, of all people!? (jk of course!) .. I like this a lot, does it convey your true feelings? (for me, that is.. XD)
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2005
lol thanks sarah :)

and of course it does. you are my one and only. :hump: best seks i've ever had was with you :XD: lol lol jk
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Sombermuse Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2005
you should write more often, i enjoyed reading this. Beautiful job.
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2005
thank you :bow: :hug: hehe
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Sombermuse Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2005
my pleasure... =)
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artistan Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2005  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sweet dreams are made of tears.........
:worship:
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2005
:)
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Austriia Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2005   Photographer
wow :faint: AMAZING :worship:
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2005
:blush: thank you! i'm glad you like it.
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dark-oblivion2 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2005
beautiful! Your words paint pretty pictures in my head. very emotional. i love it. :hug:
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2005
wow. that means so much to me. glad you enjoyed it :)
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TemptedBlaze Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2005
beautiful.. thats all i can say.. speachless
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2005
:aww: thank you very much.
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insainewho Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2005
um'
Y E A H !!!!!!
the wait is over and it was worth it

i have to wonder though was it really written thinking about ure obsession when u wrote it

either way
i'm very glad u posted it up

but now i want more!!
ha! :#1:
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2005
:#1: go me! lol

well, it was more like written when i had a clear head, not thinking of the person i'm obsessed with :giggle:

thanks! and i'll see what i can do :salute: hehe
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tappergurl Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
I know where that's coming from
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2005
:hug:
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xxlucyluxx Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2005
aww tht poem so sweet ... yet so sad well gd tho!
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